Bernard Snyder

Gold Star - 6,644 Points (11-07-1959 / Savannah Ga.)

'Broken Pieces' - Poem by Bernard Snyder

Sometimes we sort through the shattered pieces
with hopes of finding something still intact,
despite the excruciating pain we went through,
we always find ourselves looking back,
too often we allow our hearts to lead us
hoping for a second chance
putting our entire lives on 'hold'
when we should be trying to advance,
we get so 'caught up' thinking of the good times
that we forget how the bad times left us hurt and speechless
losing sight that all we have left
is memories and 'broken pieces.

Comments about 'Broken Pieces' by Bernard Snyder

  • Adeline Foster (6/19/2015 7:00:00 PM)

    Good poem. Enjoyed very much. Read mine Mitigation
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  • Susan Lacovara (6/18/2015 8:21:00 PM)

    Amen! Amen! Amen! .Your words find me, as I sit staring back at love's yesterday....Can't seem to shake the sadness. Then I stumble onto the words you offer. Eye opening inspiration to leave forward. You have provided a push, or so needed. Wonderful wisdom. PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (4/3/2015 4:03:00 AM)

    Among the shattered pieces, there may still be something in tact! In pain and misery also there is hope! Though the present may not be so happy, sometimes memories of the bygone incidents can give us a lot of joy and drown our present vexations! Enjoyed the poem that ends on a note of positivity! Thank you Bernard for this write! (Report) Reply

  • Charity Nduhiu (7/23/2014 12:19:00 AM)

    Yes sometimes we get so caught up in thinking of the good times but we forget there is a whole life ahead of us. Keep up the good work Ben (Report) Reply

  • Jeri Martindale (7/20/2014 12:29:00 AM)

    I feel the same way. Broken pieces mold and make you just like the perfect pieces do. (Report) Reply

  • (10/28/2011 6:20:00 AM)

    beautifully written. great poem! (Report) Reply

  • (10/4/2011 4:58:00 PM)

    It is odd that I haven't come across your poetry before, you are a true gem. I thank you for sharing your talent with the world. Beautiful poetry here, I expect no less. (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/21/2011 12:57:00 AM)

    Shattered and scattered, the broken pieces of our lives long to be whole. Well worded work my friend! 10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 20, 2011

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