I can't fight up the tears of your face,
I can't let them grow,
I can't let you down,
I can't fight your pain.
I'll give up forever my love,
I'll give up forever my freedom,
I'll give up forever my life,
I'll give up forever who I am.
Im only looking for your hapiness,
I just want you to know you can be happy,
I'll give up myself for you,
I love you more than I love myself..
I'll finally make you happy...
and lose who I am....
I tell you what Ana poetry is about expressing yourself.....just let the emotions fflow through your pen and a beautiful poem will be made...and you v expressed yourself well here...thanks..yes it is a lovely..cute phrase indeed 10+++ regards shan
I liked. It wasn't the best but it was a really good idea. Be more descriptive. Mor expressive in choosing your words. Thanks for asking to me comment. PLease do the same for me.
An your poems are very sincere.....you express ALL your feelings in your poems. lovely poems! ! ! 10+
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I would like to translate this poem
Letting go is hard, I can see where you are coming from and you have an abundance of feeling, very nice job