I’m Hooked On Ph (For Lucianne Fasolo) Poem by C R Clark

I’m Hooked On Ph (For Lucianne Fasolo)

Rating: 5.0


Many verses, I’ve scribbled down
O’er the years and I have found
They, mostly, sat on shelves, unread
By anyone, but me

I longed to share them with other folks
But, when the time came, I would choke
I felt they didn’t care to read
My thoughts in poetry

Then, one day I was exploring
The web for works of well known poets
I stumbled on a site, refreshing
Poemhunter. Com

I joined up and published ten
Of poems I had already penned
Then, before much time had passed
I received my first comment

I was thrilled, to say the least
That someone out there had noticed me
And actually took the time to say
I enjoyed your poetry

I think that I will ne’er forget
The first comment, my work would get
On PH, I’m now “hooked” and thank
The lovely Lucianne

Copyright C R Clark-2/29/2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris Mendros 09 April 2008

Glad to hear that someone else is 'hooked.' Scary to think all your work could've gone unnoticed. Never thought i'd say it, but thank God for the internet!

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Meggie Gultiano 09 March 2008

yes, Richard.. a beautiful and kind heart print is always a treasure to behold than a high rating with nobody to comment on it.. i cannot forget too, the first person who made a comment on my first posted poem here..Thank you Richard, for this wonderful write of yours..i love it

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Thad Wilk 29 February 2008

Very nice write Richard! ! (YES people on PH are great) they do appreciate other poets on this site and always try to read and comment here! Thanks for sharing! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Howard Johnson 29 February 2008

It is an addictive site, with days of over 20,000 readers at any givin moment, I am suprised how so many writes go through without a comment or a rating....Every comment I recieve, , , , I cherish it, , like a Pearl... Howard

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