I'm soldier,
Patriotic soldier!
I take and use honestly
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A powerful and thought provoking poem. It can also be taken as a satire. Yes, a soldier takes commands from his superiors. He is expected to follow orders and takes every arms provided for him. However, there are times the order is beyond the call of duty and if the command is in violation of human rights then the soldier must be afforded the right to contravene the said command.
This is a very well written poem; I like how you cover so many aspects of life with you. A 10
A soldier marches to orders into other's borders. A topical write that feels so right. Thank you for your comments. I really appreciate them.
I can help Superpower businessman to make and deal the war weapons! Beautifully expressed! A fabulous write.....10