Thursday, August 8, 2019

I'm Soldier And Can Help Comments

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I'm soldier,
Patriotic soldier!
 
I take and use honestly
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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 August 2019

I can help Superpower businessman to make and deal the war weapons! Beautifully expressed! A fabulous write.....10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 August 2019

A powerful and thought provoking poem. It can also be taken as a satire. Yes, a soldier takes commands from his superiors. He is expected to follow orders and takes every arms provided for him. However, there are times the order is beyond the call of duty and if the command is in violation of human rights then the soldier must be afforded the right to contravene the said command.

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 August 2019

Yeah; absolutely right you are; thanks you for your comment

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Carl Roussell 08 August 2019

This is a very well written poem; I like how you cover so many aspects of life with you. A 10

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Jane Campion 08 August 2019

A soldier marches to orders into other's borders. A topical write that feels so right. Thank you for your comments. I really appreciate them.

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