I'm Wealthier Than You Thought Poem by Mike Smith

I'm Wealthier Than You Thought

Rating: 5.0


I've a house to come home to
And there's food to make dinner
I've got friends by the score
Who are (mostly) non-sinners
I've got freedom to move
And a truck that will drive me
I've got a favorite bar
Even if it is divey
I take pleasure in writing
Find beauty in nature
I've a wonderful family
For who my love for is major
I've a job that I love
And a paycheck that's plenty
For my purposes 'coz
My expenses aren't many
I seek wisdom from elders
And from children alike
And though its tires are flat
I've a really nice bike
I am happy most days
In most things I find pleasure
And the climes that I live in
Bring on various weather
I rejoice in my hometown
I love where I came from
I've a mouth harp I play
As my good buddies strum
A healthy sense of humor
I find anything funny
There are people so poor
All they have is there money

Friday, February 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,perspective,wealth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Mayo 29 February 2016

Your poem has a nice beat- -it would sound good recited, accompanied by a jaw harp, of course. Your poem is clever, funny, and has a strong finish. Like the poet, your poem doesn't take itself too seriously. Good work.

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Mike Smith 29 February 2016

It was meant to be light hearted as you said. At the same time I believe it to be true, some of the 'wealthiest' people out there don't enjoy there extravagant lives nearly as much as I do my modest one. Thank you Brian.

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Souren Mondal 29 February 2016

The more I read of you Mike, the more I feel that you are a really humble, kind, empathitic human being.. I enjoy your poems a great deal and you stand amongst the my favourite member poets here.. Wonderful work mate.. I am glad I have come across your poems..

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Mike Smith 29 February 2016

Thank you Souren. Knowing that my thoughts resonate with someone else is greatly encouraging to me. And for the record, the feeling is mutual friend.

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Kelly Kurt 27 February 2016

You used the word score as a unit of measurement in a poem.: -) I haven't done that for a fortnight. You are a wealthy man, Mike. And a great poet/philosopher/person/ginger Keep 'em coming

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Mike Smith 27 February 2016

I am fortunate beyond my deserving. I am humbled by my position in life. wealth is something perceived and not something earned. Your comments, as always, are greatly appreciated Kelly. Thank you

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