I Need You Poem by anisha Kolencherry

I Need You

Rating: 4.5


Help me to come to you.
Hold me, give me your hand.
Look at me.
Without your help nothing can be done.
Without your help i can not step up

There are no steps.
I am in the air,
flying like birds, butterflies,
like a flight going up and up
through the blue-white skies.

Indescribable and seemingly never ending skies
I fly alone with the Lord.
Ican see you vague.
But how can i come close to you?
My heart wants to come to you.
I like to touch you.
I want to hold your loving hand
and spring like a little child.
Take me, come to me, give me your hand.
I am longing for you.

I Need You
Friday, September 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 18 September 2015

There are no steps. I am in the air, flying like birds, butterflies, like a flight going up and up through the blue-white skies. i fly alone with the Lord. your longingness for your God is very clear in this poem. thank you for your divine search which is well expressed in this poem...

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Shija Francis 22 September 2015

I like to touch you. I want to hold your loving hand and spring like a little child. Take me, come to me, give me your hand. I am longing for you. very good

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Annette Aitken 07 June 2016

These words seem to float in the endless sky, a lovely write. Annette

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Ramesh Rai 02 October 2015

Longing for love to meet the eternal goal.. Can not wait for any response. Wish to see you with the creator who made us all.

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Shija Francis 28 September 2015

wonderful words. There are no steps. I am in the air,

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Prathibha Francis 28 September 2015

I need you. I liked so much..........

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 September 2015

Without your help nothing can be done! Yes! ! The the truth about life. We need each other to move on; and, we need the CREATOR all the time. Nice work.

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