M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 163,883 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

I Offer You My Heart - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Boy to Girl
I offer you my heart
Take care as if it's yours now
Remember I am a heartless creature
So don't expect any mercy….

Girl to Boy
Oh, I return you your precious heart
I need you to complete
Neither body nor heart
What will I do with them?

Boy to Girl
For long you wanted me
And I live in my heart
And to offer you anything less
I did never think.

Girl to Boy
My pleasure to have your heat
But not to leave you heartless
And inhumane, I surrender
Myself to you in return

Love is no trade
Nor the division
It is inseparable
The divine.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, love, love and friendship

Form: Quatern


Comments about I Offer You My Heart by M. Asim Nehal

  • Nosheen Irfan (1/28/2016 3:49:00 AM)


    Wow. That's a unique one. You have presented the concept of true love in a conversational style. Love is no trade...true. Refreshing to read.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Muhammad Imtiyaz (1/14/2016 9:37:00 AM)


    beautifully written lines..... (Report) Reply

  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/14/2016 9:24:00 AM)


    Really an amazingly narrated beautiful poem...loved it...thanx for sharing :) (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/14/2016 9:12:00 AM)


    For the sake of peace and love! Nice work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 14, 2016



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