I Remember, I Remember, Yes, I Remember....

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i remember,
i remember, yes,
i remember,
when we were
in September
on late summer
near the Black Sea,
i was with you and he,
upon a dead calm sea,
you remember too?
our eldest son four years old, intelligent enough to swim,
but he hardly reached the brim,
the edge of the beaches where to begin,
alike as he had begun,
to swim for fun,
upon that dead calm sea
i remember,
i remember, yes,
i remember,
when we were there
in September....

photo Mamaia Beach, Romania by Google

©Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Monday 2 March 2020
At 9.56 hrs A.M. Dutch Time

I Remember, I Remember, Yes, I Remember....
Monday, March 2, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dangerous,memory
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
alike as he had begun,
to swim for fun,
upon that dead calm sea
i remember,
i remember, yes,
i remember,
when we were there
in September....


©Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Monday 2 March 2020
At 9.56 hrs A.M. Dutch Time
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 03 March 2020

Summer near the black sea is remembered. You have remembered everything you like to notice. Upon that dead calm sea, you feel and beautify the eyes of life and feelings. A great perception motivates mind. September memory is well accompanied with a beautiful photo. Thank you very much for sharing this wonderful poem...10

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 March 2020

sometimes some memory awakes the sleeping mood of the happiness/// beautiful writing

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