In this fake world, with your love so true
And you always by my side, it feels so good..
False images everywhere, world full of lies
I see my true self in your enticing eyes....
You've always loved me the way I am
Wish to give you the same, Really wish I can
I feel so secure to have you there for me
Coz true love elsewhere, I can hardly see...
Love is the most amazing thing happened to me
You makes my love special and really it is...
Used to search myself in the mirror and skies
Until I saw myself, In your scintillating eyes....
Your eyes so true, gives perfect reflection of mine
Tells me whats wrong with me, what's bad and what's all fine...
They give me strength, when I see so much love and care
No mater what happens, know you will always be there....
I promise to come back to you at end of each day
You are special, My sweetheart in every way...
Baby, I am always yours, you'll remain mine
Coz, I see myself in your 2 beautiful eyes! ! !
Note: The Topic was suggested to me by my friend and poet Anita Trivedi and she asked me to write few lines on this. Hope notto dissapoint her.
this is wonderful Mr. Rohit i really liked it and i du think it wil disapoint her thanks for sharing :)
accepting the person as he is, is something only some special people in our lifes can do.. and the true image of ourself as a human is only known to a person who understands us in and out.. even if they are our flaws.. seeing them with the eyes of our loved ones gives us an inspiration to amend them... thats the beauty of having such people who make us feel unique, blessed and special.... great write! ! !
It's a smooth read, nice piece! liked the opening line 'In this fake world.....'
Love the title and the poem...The eyes never tell lies..it is a connection.. Your words and flow always beautiful but this one is beautiful by it's own way...The feelings flow like waterfall...calming, refreshing and inspiring...Lovely! i give u 13marks...oh what! the max is 10? oh okay so i have to give u 10, and the balance u keep for next poem in advance..lol Joking: p..Thanks for sharing and inviting
You have not disappointed my friend Rohit but have done great justice to the topic. Lovely lines!
This poem is absolutely sensational! I love how you connect the ideas between them...well expressed feelings
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
B'ful poem on love..not disappointing to her or us...keep it up..