I Too Await His Hinting Nod Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

I Too Await His Hinting Nod

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Fire worms know it right from birth—
Know sacrifice and its worth,
So do dewdrops on green leaf—
They seldom have all the day,
That their life's born to be brief—
That would end with sun's first ray.

Me too, no chosen pea in pod,
Awaiting His hint, His last nod!
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Musings |03.04.2019|
Topic: destiny, death

Wednesday, November 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: death,destiny
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life is like a battery recharged. Careful, one may get some time, but wisdom lies in awaiting destiny's last hint.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2019

Muse of nature! ! Life on earth; Birth! ! ! ! Life and death. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 November 2019

Thanks for visiting, and for your feedback

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 November 2019

Life is like a battery recharged. /// awesome line

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 November 2019

Thank you, you all three great poets agree on one point.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2019

They seldom have all the day. Death is truth. All should feel this. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 November 2019

You too Kumarmaniji, it is very interesting to read your comments.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 November 2019

Life is like a battery recharged! I sincerely admire the thought contents pertaining to life, destiny and death! Well penned sir.................10/10

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 November 2019

You are a great poet, who not only reads words (what is said) , but also the underlying connotations (what is left unsaid) . This is admirable indeed.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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