I tossed up a handful of diamond bits
They stayed in the air for a while…
An’ came down to settle on the dust
I found them lying on her side
I tossed up a handful of poem bits
They stayed in the air for a while…
An’ came down to settle on her heart
I found them glistening in her eyes…
A poem shining like a diamond itself...Very precious and heartfelt. A.
Sir, Your poems are real gems. How can mere stones truimph over them? Great thought. Great poem
wow...so lovely...very meaningful full of love... very lovely thoughts...carved into a poem a poem for a love one...so sweet.. Cant help but smile...smile..smile.. the second stanza is so great and heart-warming... diamonds are better but your poems are...forever... I love this...my fave.... 10++++ lovelots, Maia
What a wonderful poem. A poetic gem that shimmers like diamond. A great tribute to Poetry. Beautifully crafted and well executed. Onto my Poem List.
Masterly and Maestro…’ I found them glistening in her eyes…’ mine too Sir… Yeah perfect culmination eventuality of poem lies in to make one sad or elated and so on… Voted 10 [hf] Ms. Nivedita UK
Beatiful and fully logical, sir.....your poems, coming straight from your heart are bound to be in the heart of your readers......regards.....
I like this simple little poem, almost like a rddle. The thought behind it is one that I have sympathy with - better to have a poet than a diamond broker by your side (unless the diamond broker is also a poet, of course!)
Love how the inner action find it's voice through your verbs..(smile)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Now that is beautiful!