I behold this starlit summer sky
On this day, the month of May,
Enter, afloat thoughts a few,
Mother's Day, in my mind
Years now, I lost her since
Mother my, so dear,
My eyes stare at the sky above
Where a thousand stars alight!
Amidst the glow and glitter there
One star I find differs
That sends down a cool, loving gaze
That whispers soothing words
The love and care so missing long
Drift on me through the air
I get a gift on Mother's Day!
My mother is right up there!
This is such an inspirational poem Kesav. To know her love reflects right back to you from above. The one star that differs and send you her special love. Beautiful words for a beautifully Mother. Karin Anderson 10/10
you were right i did enjoy it.... thankyou.... So beautiful and decriptive it was lovely...
Great poem Kesav, you wrote it from your heart..it's so obvious....lovely to read..Merna
very beautiful.. i just she cried in heaven when you completed this... beautiful
A beautiful and touching poem. A great tribute and remembrance for a wonderful mother. The love and care of our Mother will always be remembered no matter what. The love is well engraved on the tablet of our hearts. Our love for our Mothers, too will always be there, nurtured until the end of time. So beautifully written with superb imagery.
Thank you all who commented on my poem yesterday. Thanks a lot for your nice words
Divasavum Ammavai nenavu varum. Adhum Ungholodu Ammami great. Rombha nanna erukku. Super.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Among the glow and glitter there One star I find differs That sends down cool and loving gaze; Feel whispers soothing words I find this very touching and it pulls my heart string. As i can also relate to this, ..sometimes, i look up to the sky, pretending that one of the stars there is my mother looking down at me whispering words that puts me to sleep in peace..Thanks for this sharing