Thursday, November 7, 2013

I Waited A Long Time For You, And My Dream Came True

Rating: 4.5
I was like a withered flower in a barren desert,
till I breathed your smile that brought life to my heart.

I was like a homeless child looking for a shelter.
till you got me in your heart, awh nothing is much better.

When I saw you, I felt my heart flying freely in the sky.
I said ' Angels don't exist, could she be a butterfly? ! '.
I waited a long time for the one who will wipe tears stuck in my eyes.
Then I met you, and to my lifelong loneliness said 'Good-bye'.

You taught me how to live, how to love, how to sacrifice.
Till you came into my life, my world turned to a paradise.

I wrote our story on the walls of my heart, to tell it to our children,
to teach them what true love is, and let our souls rest in Heaven.
Abdallah Gamal
Chew Angelina 17 August 2015
This is a beautiful poem [3
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Darlene Walsh 14 August 2015
It's a lovely and romantic poem with wonderful touching images, sounds like love at first sight. I hope the love they share lasts forever.
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Sara Javed 13 August 2015
This is a beautiful poem! Love the way you write, and how it is depicted in a few word, but holds a strong message. Lovely! Keep writing on!
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Unwritten Soul 13 August 2015
Greatest short romantic poem...truly i really loved this, you touch every beat in my heart, i know everyone will also feel the same_Soul
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Little Opal 11 August 2015
I think it's beautiful!
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Roseann Shawiak 30 July 2015
What a fascinatingly beautiful story of true love, pure and everlasting! Love defining itself through every poets vision - in every poem ever written. Your poem is the way to teach your children the way to true love, it is perfect! Your imagery is superb, Abdallah, so tender, gentle and soulful. This is now a favorite of mine, definitely a 10! Thank you for sharing! RoseAnn
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Nishi Kumari 31 December 2014
love is so undefined...beautifully expressed
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Nishi Kumari 31 December 2014
a lovely is undefined....and its beauty is unparallel....nicely written...
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Mihaela Pirjol 09 September 2014
A poem written from a heart in
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Neela Nath Das 29 August 2014
to teach them what true love is, and let our souls rest in Heaven. - - - - - - - - -Fathomless!
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