I Want Not - 02: The Altitude Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

I Want Not - 02: The Altitude

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I want not
That height of a mountain peak
High, great, yet alien-
that never bears a land or tree,
that never backs an undergrowth
of plants and shrubs for free,
where birds of Earth,
the lovers of height,
the lovers of the sky high,
the blue seekers of horizons,
don't sit on it
do not dwell there.


Rather I would love to be a tree
Banyan or Mango or an Oak,
for folks to gather at noon,
for birds to flutter in the morn,
for kids to play under it,
fruits for squirrels
and rats to eat
to fit to their needs
and care and render
before they ask for.

I Want Not - 02: The Altitude
Thursday, December 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: ego ,fame,neighbors
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Human achievements are human resources and must be shared amongst the inhabitants of the land. People who become great forget that their height, fame, status, strength, caliber, everything that they achieve are something to be adored by people, the neighbours, not the peaks or oceans or the sky above.
We must love to share what we have. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

I want not That height of a mountain peak High, great, yet alien- We must love to share what we have Rather I would love to be a tree to fit to their needs and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks. 10+++++++++

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Rini Shibu 07 December 2017

Wonderful poem, our achievements should be useful for others, rather heights which is seen by none

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Anita Aparajita Das 07 December 2017

Rather I would love to be a tree to fit to their needs and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks. 10++++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 07 December 2017

A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks. 10++++

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Sabita Sahoo 07 December 2017

and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks. 10++++ Sabita

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Alina Kaikeyi 09 December 2017

Rather I would love to be a tree to fit to their needs and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing 10+++ Alina

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Alina Kaikeyi 09 December 2017

Rather I would love to be a tree to fit to their needs and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks. 10+++++ Rani

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Sonali Parida 07 December 2017

Rather I would love to be a tree to fit to their needs and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks. 10++++ Sonali

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Sonali Parida 07 December 2017

Rather I would love to be a tree to fit to their needs and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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