I Want To Go Out Myself Poem by dipak adhya

I Want To Go Out Myself

Rating: 3.9


I want to go out myself
From my eyes, breathe, thoughts...
And want to adjust there
With the untouched folks

I'm certain that there is implicit
Pure love and passion
Adoration for a heart
That does not know wealth and pedigree
Not what in future may be

I want to go out myself
And I must go
If you forbid me
Let say them so:
Not to love from heart
And to be practical...

I Want To Go Out Myself
Friday, April 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
dipak adhya 29 April 2019

This is the bestest poem ever. Congradulations on member poem of the day!

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dipak adhya 29 April 2019

Wow, as I reread this I see that I made plent of mistakes. This relly dint deserve to be poem of the day!

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dipak adhya 29 April 2019

this really doesnt make any sense, does it? Sorry.

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Mohabeer Beeharry 29 April 2019

How lovely is this write, so full of wistfulness and beauty, and eyes on a world you only know. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Savita Tyagi 29 April 2019

We all are permitted to take flights of imagination, a longing simply coming from heart is well expressed in this poem. Congratulations!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 April 2020

Thought provoking poem in the backdrop of present situation. Hearty congratulations for the well deserved poem of the day.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 29 April 2020

A very thought provoking poem, keeping in mind the current Lockdown period. It's natural to feel the urge to get out of home, to 'want to go out.' Congratulations on being poet of the day.

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Chinedu Dike 29 April 2020

An insightful bit of verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 April 2020

Can be classified as one of the great poems of the recent times. Like to read again and again. Congrats.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 April 2020

A pragmatic philosophical poem......10+++

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