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Leaving Me You May Go Far Away

Rating: 4.1
leaving me you may go far away
Your remembrance is prominent to my heart
And It'll remain still
I'll not forget you ever.

leaving me you may go far away
I may not be able walk with you
Side by side
The known ways will be unknown
The trodden paths may ask for coming once more
But I'll not
Our walking and togetherness will remain still
To my heart.

leaving me you may go far away
I must not hold your hands
You may not feel me
But I must
I must touch you all the days and night
As you must not be able to go far away
Leaving my heart.
dipak adhya
Thursday, April 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 09 October 2020
The title is eye catching, and the words following are heart touching!
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Anil Kumar Panda 06 April 2020
A nice poem on love. Beautifully crafted to make an interesting reading. Congrats.
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nice poem...great impact on my mind.. clear 10 it is your choice to break the promise and undo all the commitments in the present scenario what have we done to it intact? it wasn't in fact from the day one, you were different let us part happily and not lament Hasmukh Mehta
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Rocky 06 April 2020
To be in love but not be together is unbearable
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Dr Antony Theodore 06 April 2020
You may not feel me But I must I must touch you all the days and night As you must not be able to go far away Leaving my heart. The struggle of a loving heart. thank u dear poet. very good poem..
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 April 2020
A sweet composition! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being selected as Poem of the Day!
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Mahtab Bangalee 06 April 2020
Leaving me yea leaving me in thy heart of love leaving me to hold you again by heart leaving me to hold yo again by love whole day and night till the last breath......../// nice and lovely poem penned; congrats for being selected this poem as POD
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Rajnish Manga 06 April 2020
Love can be objective and love can be subjective. It depends on how much you care. Thanks and Congrats for this day's Poem of the Day.
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Congratulations poet Dipak for being featured in POD. " You must not be able go far away leaving my heart" Beautiful...10
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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 April 2020
But I must I must touch you all the days and night As you must not be able to go far away Leaving my heart...........I am mesmerizrd by these words. Want and want not, wsh and wish not. So complex! Loveliest said and worded. A 10 Full Score. CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day.
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