Leaving Me You May Go Far Away Poem by dipak adhya

Leaving Me You May Go Far Away

Rating: 4.1


leaving me you may go far away
Your remembrance is prominent to my heart
And It'll remain still
I'll not forget you ever.

leaving me you may go far away
I may not be able walk with you
Side by side
The known ways will be unknown
The trodden paths may ask for coming once more
But I'll not
Our walking and togetherness will remain still
To my heart.

leaving me you may go far away
I must not hold your hands
You may not feel me
But I must
I must touch you all the days and night
As you must not be able to go far away
Leaving my heart.

Leaving Me You May Go Far Away
Thursday, April 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 06 April 2020

But I must I must touch you all the days and night As you must not be able to go far away Leaving my heart...........I am mesmerizrd by these words. Want and want not, wsh and wish not. So complex! Loveliest said and worded. A 10 Full Score. CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day.

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M Asim Nehal 06 April 2019

Congrats for the honours POTD, This is what love is all about, care, feeling and remembrance, crafty poem.....10+++

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Prabir Gayen 06 April 2019

Congratulation....dear poet....very beautiful poem... Thanks...100000++++++..I will visit again.. thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 April 2019

'I'll not forget you ever! 👫😍🤩 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bulent Karaalioglu 06 April 2019

Crutches became an integral part of my life

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Khairul Ahsan 09 October 2020

The title is eye catching, and the words following are heart touching!

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 April 2020

A nice poem on love. Beautifully crafted to make an interesting reading. Congrats.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 April 2020

nice poem...great impact on my mind.. clear 10 it is your choice to break the promise and undo all the commitments in the present scenario what have we done to it intact? it wasn't in fact from the day one, you were different let us part happily and not lament Hasmukh Mehta

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Rocky 06 April 2020

To be in love but not be together is unbearable

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 April 2020

You may not feel me But I must I must touch you all the days and night As you must not be able to go far away Leaving my heart. The struggle of a loving heart. thank u dear poet. very good poem..

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