abhimanyu kumar.s

Gold Star - 12,170 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

I Was Dead - Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

I had my dinner and
Slept around 10 of night
After a couple hour or so
I found myself dead
Ya, I was dead
My body had become motionless
Eyes shut, hands erect
What about my dreams and aims
All gone, all shattered
Man, I was dead
What next?
Possibly burn, bury and ashes
Suddenly I heard someone shouting
Idiot get up!it's 7 of morning
If you want to know the truth
I was sleeping.

Topic(s) of this poem: life and death


Comments about I Was Dead by abhimanyu kumar.s

  • Malvikas Poet Channel (9/16/2019 6:28:00 AM)

    Well expressed with death and life.
    Thank you poet.
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  • Malvikas Poet Channel (9/16/2019 6:24:00 AM)

    Well expressed about death and life,
    Thank you Poet.
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  • Adeeb Alfateh (6/25/2019 12:55:00 AM)

    Possibly burn, bury and ashes
    Suddenly I heard someone shouting
    Idiot get up! it's 7 of morning
    If you want to know the truth
    I was sleeping.

    great write 10++++++++++++++++++
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  • Poet Poet (4/6/2019 6:19:00 PM)

    BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY
    HOW INTELLIGENT R YE
    KNOWING READERS ARE SILLY ''
    LOL LOVELY AK '

    HAVE U EVER READ ME @31

    MOMS SMILES
    MAY BE
    THNXXXXSSSsssss
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  • Jagdish Singh Ramana (2/7/2019 10:07:00 PM)

    wonderful! without aim man is dead and dead is life.
    a great symbol.
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  • (1/4/2019 6:59:00 PM)

    Really it is so nice l just like it (Report)Reply

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  • (10/26/2018 12:34:00 AM)

    Loved your poem.. Beautifull expression on life and death. I guess you can publish a poem book. (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (5/3/2018 5:51:00 AM)

    We all are mortals with endless dreams to fulfil.Very often one may wonder what would happen to those unfinished works if he die suddenly ! ! This apprehension may appear like a dream when one is sleeping with such fears in mind..A nice poem, thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Narayanan Kutty Pozhath (4/30/2018 1:27:00 AM)

    We all go to such state everyday when we sleep. Nice expression of Sushpthy. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/13/2018 4:12:00 AM)

    Having gone through a near death experience, I was naturally attracted to this poem. Although it was the opposite of what I had expected, it did not disappoint. In fact, it was great. Suspenseful. And very witty! Excellent write! (Report)Reply

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  • Chinedu Dike (1/11/2018 8:06:00 AM)

    Well composed and nicely drafted with a tinge of humour. Thanks for sharing Kumar. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/27/2017 6:55:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem on Life and death having stunning expression by means of a dream. The feeling of death and after it's condition have been painted cutely and touchingly. The reality comes after dream when a person wakes up. The last three lines reveal the truth. It may be quoted..........
    Suddenly I heard someone shouting
    Idiot get up! it's 7 of morning
    If you want to know the truth
    I was sleeping.
    Fantastic dear Abhimanyu fantastic!
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    Abhimanyu Kumar.s(11/27/2017 7:06:00 AM)

    Thank you..

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  • Binayakumar Mohanty (11/13/2017 12:27:00 AM)

    Nicely crafted poem full of great realization in small things. (Report)Reply

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  • Pratik Rajani (10/4/2017 9:57:00 AM)

    nice poem man
    you may like my new poem be like water
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  • Hazel Durham (5/22/2016 4:30:00 AM)

    Original with a great expression that brings the reader into your world with ease, great title! (Report)Reply

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  • Nosheen Irfan (5/20/2016 3:15:00 AM)

    A very interesting poem. Human subconscious can trigger peculiar images. A state of wakefulness reveals the reality. (Report)Reply

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  • Jasbir Chatterjee (5/20/2016 3:01:00 AM)

    Quite an interesting poem. Thanks for sharing it. (Report)Reply

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  • Heather Wilkins (7/7/2013 10:18:00 PM)

    a good enjoyable poem. a nice read. a good drama (Report)Reply

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  • Yash Shinde (10/18/2012 9:24:00 AM)

    ha ha ha ha....................how does it feel please describe...well liked your poem very much.................a humourous experience man.: -) (Report)Reply

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  • (10/17/2012 11:54:00 PM)

    ha ha ha....how does being dead feel like? What if dead people, or their souls, or whatever that remains (if anything does!) , would step next to their bodies and look at themselves? Interesting questions you are raising. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 23, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 26, 2017


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