Come on, come on
Join the party
Mingle with our fools
A farewell to your bloody rules.
Colourful dressings and settings
Personal emotions and conflicts
Smiles and cries
We miss you, please forget us.
Calling for a presence of masters
Insulting them before some idiots
Bloody minds and capabilities
Fit for nothing, nothing in reality.
Sweet hearts miss you all
A farewell to you all
Out of all from idiots
We respect you with heart.
Deadly talks in walks
Greeting and wishes on surface
Curse and slaps in depth
We know you are ready to fight.
We miss you one and all
Name sake our love and all
Its a farewell to you fools
We mean farewell to idiots
Get lost and we begg
Never come back.
A Beautiful poem presented in a funny way but with a meaningful message hidden behind. I loved the way you presented it so well. Congrats....Well deserved poem for the day. Thanks for sharing.
Loved this young energy expressed so well. Humorous and witty. Congratulations! Keep it up.
I think this poms is about the campus life and thisa is the time to leave the campus to bid farewell all the funny things and enjoyment...to greet new life forgetting the life here in campus
Humourous yet highlighting certain types of behaviours that we need to say farewell to.
Intresting poem. I like the steady flow of words. Thanks for shaing such creative piece.
Deadly talks in walks Greeting and wishes on surface Curse and slaps in depth We know you are ready to fight. greatly write great 10++++++++++++++
yes, your PH 'bio' warned that some of your poems may be difficult to understand due to the use of symbolism etc. i love the illustration, but, alas, i do lack understanding of the poem. two typos i believe: in last stanza: Its and begg. i'll read another poem. bri ;)
Keep posted..... Long live paaji...
Sweet and bitter farewell...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Lovely members poem of the day.