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I Was It's Prey! - Poem by .Pd. is here

Admiring the bird
Perched on the tree
I envied her
for she was free.
I am in awe
of her flights.
I adore her for
the pleasant sights.


Still admiring the bird
Her beauty I harboured.
Sudenly the same bird
Pooped right on me.
Neither did I complain
Nor did I fume;
Afterall it was her freedom
Her birth right I assume.


I looked up again at the bird
Perched on the tree.
With hateful eyes
No admiration, please.
Her freedom to poop
& to target anyone,
I so have grown to hate
Ever since I was the it's prey!

(Wriiten after the bird pooped on my new shirt which i was wearing to college....and boy was i mad.....)

(15 April,2006)


Comments about I Was It's Prey! by .Pd. is here

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/25/2006 2:49:00 AM)


    ALTHOUGH MOST TAKE ME AS AN ECCENTICAL DARKSIDE WRITER...TRUTH BE TOLD..I LOVE CANDORED WIT...I'M JUST NO GOOD AT IT...TOO MUCH LATE NIGHT POE& BRONTE INDULGING...THIS WAS A VERY ENJOYABLE PIECE & YOU YOUNG LADY ARE VERY GOOD AT IT!
    PERHAPS YOU COULD GIVE AN OLE' BLOKE SOME TIPS ON WRITTEN WIT!
    FRANK...TEN FOR PREETS& WIT!
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  • (5/12/2006 6:50:00 AM)


    funny funny...nice read...love...nalini (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2006 2:36:00 PM)


    Good one preeti, i wish i could write such a lovely poem for incidents like yours.
    Well done.
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  • (4/16/2006 7:57:00 AM)


    Nice funny poem, Preeti. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • (4/15/2006 3:51:00 AM)


    I truly sympathize! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 15, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, August 14, 2006


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