Nosheen Irfan

Gold Star - 54,655 Points (Lahore, Pakistan)

I Will Make It - Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Someday I will make it
Before this time can break me
I am brittle, I am cracked
A mirror that reflects many faces
But I will make it
With light steps I will tread
The stones will turn under my feet
All the way to the impossible dream
Though my heart will be heavy as hell
But I will make it
Make it to the open arms
That will encompass me
Hold me and keep me armored
In a sunny home, serene and bright
Forever and forever
I will stay there
The wonder of it will never cease
The growth of it will never ease
Inside and outside the frame
The picture will smile
With eyes soft as the starlight
And though my head will be spinning webs
But I will make it
Through the shadows and the nights.

Topic(s) of this poem: hope


Comments about I Will Make It by Nosheen Irfan

  • Norah Tunney (6/29/2017 10:27:00 PM)


    I can feel the trust and the hope underlying these beautiful inspiring lines.A poem to lift our spirits and help us on our way. It resonates with us all as we are all broken to varying degrees by the storms of life..I love how the poem builds up to the last wonderful lines but I will make it through the shadows of the night
    Thank you Nosheen
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  • Robert Murray Smith (3/15/2017 8:30:00 PM)


    Nosheen a very well written poem.+++10

    Robert
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/23/2016 8:24:00 AM)


    With Positiveness! Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/31/2016 5:28:00 AM)


    Excellent in inspiration. I really like this! (Report) Reply

  • (1/7/2016 1:06:00 AM)


    positive thought is a start to healing (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/17/2015 8:12:00 AM)


    a nice overtone of optimism pervades through out the poem, well-penned poem, i enjoyed reading the poem, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 17, 2015



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