Abdallah Gamal

Rookie - 345 Points (8/June/1995 / Egypt)

I Won'T Give Up Anymore, This Is My Dream And I Adore - Poem by Abdallah Gamal

I come today to say to this life that I'm not afraid.
I don't even care anymore about what you made.
Everything has its end, but the smile won't fade.
Everything has its price, and so I have paid.

You think that you are strong enough to catch me in a cage,
But sorry about your guesses, I just have opened a new page,
where the pencil is in my hand, and the eraser is beside me,
and the dream is mine, so you don't know what it gonna be.

So catch your breath, and take all your precautions,
because in my world there are no any anticipations.


Comments about I Won'T Give Up Anymore, This Is My Dream And I Adore by Abdallah Gamal

  • Chinedu Dike (1/4/2015 12:24:00 PM)

    A lovely poem, reminds me of the last two lines of the poem INVICTUS: I AM THE MASTER OF MY FATE, THE CAPTAIN OF MY SOUL. Beautiful indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX. (Report)Reply

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  • Moha Abbou (8/18/2012 8:55:00 PM)

    This poem is a shiny sparkling poem, and I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE it. (Report)Reply

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  • Shashikant Nishant Sharma (5/18/2012 10:24:00 AM)

    Very nice poem, full of emotional expression... (Report)Reply

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  • (11/3/2011 8:49:00 PM)

    wow, i can really tell that this came from the heart. i am literally bussing with hope right now! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Salma Torrez (9/22/2011 5:13:00 PM)

    realy beautiful gamal she3r jamel kitir shikran. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/18/2011 1:03:00 PM)

    Very well written (: I love your style! The topic is just amazing, I can tell it's meaningful and special to you but other people can also relate. I also absolutely love the rhyme and the rhythm of it. The ability to write the way you do is truly a gift, my friend. Keep it up (: ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Vipins Puthooran (9/17/2011 3:46:00 PM)

    Well written and, a beautiful poem (Report)Reply

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  • (9/17/2011 5:55:00 AM)

    A really good poem, with a great flow to it.
    May i invite you to read my poem called,
    Boy to a man.
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  • (9/16/2011 8:24:00 PM)

    i like the change in the rhyme scheme, it helps the poem flow nicely. well done. (Report)Reply

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  • Mohammed Al-balushi (9/16/2011 12:28:00 PM)

    really wonderful poem full of hope and stronge starting wothout any fair, well done +10. (Report)Reply

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/16/2011 2:13:00 AM)

    such a beautiful write..well done (Report)Reply

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  • Leonard Dabydeen (9/15/2011 11:02:00 PM)

    So much creative exuberance in your writing, with a positive spirit. Each stanza stands out with a challenge for living and moving forward. Keep up the good work. You may read and share my work also. TFS (Report)Reply

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  • Leonard Dabydeen (9/15/2011 11:02:00 PM)

    So much creative exuberance in your writing, with a positive spirit. Each stanza stands out with a challenge for living and moving forward. Keep up the good work. You may read and share my work also. TFS (Report)Reply

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  • (9/15/2011 5:43:00 PM)

    thats good. It is. rlly. Im glad you take an intrest in writing. not many pppl do anymore (Report)Reply

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  • (9/15/2011 7:22:00 AM)

    WONDERFUL! ! i absolutely love it. speaks volumes to everypart of me Great job (Report)Reply

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  • (9/14/2011 2:17:00 AM)

    Invite you to read my new poem Light a Lamp of Faith and pls give your valubale comment
    Regards
    sam
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  • (9/13/2011 5:47:00 PM)

    I love this! You are verryyyy talented! (Report)Reply

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  • (9/11/2011 7:02:00 PM)

    Great! very very intense! I like it a lot, and I think you have done a beautiful job here! (Report)Reply

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  • (9/11/2011 7:01:00 PM)

    Great! very very intense! I like it a lot, and I think you have done a beautiful job here! (Report)Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (9/11/2011 4:01:00 PM)

    Wow! Speechless! Your amazing and talented positive input displayed in this well penned and poignant write from a young poet, just surprises me! 10+++ God Bless You! and Keep inspiring the World with more of those powerful and thought provoking writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! If time permits, please, read and I hope you enjoy my latest pose: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/you-are-unique/ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 11, 2011



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