I Won'T Give Up Anymore, This Is My Dream And I Adore Poem by Abdallah Gamal

I Won'T Give Up Anymore, This Is My Dream And I Adore

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I come today to say to this life that I'm not afraid.
I don't even care anymore about what you made.
Everything has its end, but the smile won't fade.
Everything has its price, and so I have paid.

You think that you are strong enough to catch me in a cage,
But sorry about your guesses, I just have opened a new page,
where the pencil is in my hand, and the eraser is beside me,
and the dream is mine, so you don't know what it gonna be.

So catch your breath, and take all your precautions,
because in my world there are no any anticipations.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sam Varghis 14 September 2011

Invite you to read my new poem Light a Lamp of Faith and pls give your valubale comment Regards sam

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Bella Hernandez 15 September 2011

WONDERFUL! ! i absolutely love it. speaks volumes to everypart of me Great job

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Amber Marie 15 September 2011

thats good. It is. rlly. Im glad you take an intrest in writing. not many pppl do anymore

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Leonard Dabydeen 15 September 2011

So much creative exuberance in your writing, with a positive spirit. Each stanza stands out with a challenge for living and moving forward. Keep up the good work. You may read and share my work also. TFS

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Leonard Dabydeen 15 September 2011

So much creative exuberance in your writing, with a positive spirit. Each stanza stands out with a challenge for living and moving forward. Keep up the good work. You may read and share my work also. TFS

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Chinedu Dike 04 January 2015

A lovely poem, reminds me of the last two lines of the poem INVICTUS: I AM THE MASTER OF MY FATE, THE CAPTAIN OF MY SOUL. Beautiful indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.

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Moha Abbou 18 August 2012

This poem is a shiny sparkling poem, and I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE it.

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Liliana Roman 03 November 2011

wow, i can really tell that this came from the heart. i am literally bussing with hope right now! !

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Salma Torrez 22 September 2011

realy beautiful gamal she3r jamel kitir shikran.

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Chris Haifley 18 September 2011

Very well written (: I love your style! The topic is just amazing, I can tell it's meaningful and special to you but other people can also relate. I also absolutely love the rhyme and the rhythm of it. The ability to write the way you do is truly a gift, my friend. Keep it up (: ! ! !

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