One evening I saw my dreams flying like a bird ~
On the bank of a river, trying to go beyond the clouds.
One evening I saw my dreams flying like a butterfly,
In a flower garden, fluttering around to suck the nectar.
One evening I saw my dreams on the seashore,
Moving on the waves, hitting the shores again and again.
One evening I saw my dreams climbing the cliffhanger,
To reach the top of the mountain and to talk with the clouds.
One evening I saw my dreams plummeting with the candles,
To solace and brighten the dark night.
Now I wonder how innocent my dreams are to chase things far from the realities.
Wow--The innocent dreams are pure joy and lift the spirit giving peace and solace to the soul and mankind.
Great ending: Now I wonder how innocent my dreams are to chase things far from the realities, appreciate it.
Beautiful, beautiful poem. I liked the phrase, 'my dreams flying like a bird'. Top score!
YOUR DREAMS are so wonderful M A N if you remeber me I of your poems dream
Most deserving Member Poem Of The Day, hoorray for my dear poet friend Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir. Congratulations!
Profound poem, astonishingly worded and brilliantly presented,5 great Stars full
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent! Congrats on getting yr doctorate