Ice Water Poem by Tailor Bell
Ice Water
Here on the surface of the sun
Its hard to remember what you were concerned over
Ten thousand degrees or more
Inside hosts of hot-house cooks abound
To stay cool you have to move about
Stroll around some, maybe
Over by the magnetic flux zone
Note to self: Pickup some nice shades at the drugstore
Well I love the obscurity - so many meanings possible. Good poem, Steve
I believe this is again in the abstract zone--I like it---Melvina
Tailor - maybe you're suffering from a little heat stroke? lol! Interesting perspective, here. Makes you wonder..................... Linda
Takes me away to that feeling of when we used to have summers in England... neat. atmospheric write, love the end touch. t x
Thought-provoking AND scientifically accurate (re sunspots being cooler) ! Nicely done! -chuck
The intensity of fire and ice - an impressive surrealist piece of whimsy with a down to earth coda. Love this. Allie xxxx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:16:51 AM # 1.0.0
this one here is on my list of things i like but i dont know why