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Rating: 4.8
Every night I must give up to
the next day
Grow tired, retreat and fade away
My heart calling out for more time
My thoughts drifting off among
the sublime
So I pray in the spare
of lucidness
My hopes, my dreams,
my willingness
Yet into sleep I dive
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Jim Boone 03 February 2012
Tailor, I like this one so much I am going to write my own version. It is part of the thought process of everyone who has lived. Jim
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Colin J... 22 July 2009
'So I pray in the spare of lucidness' Excellent... Colin J...
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Andrew Blakemore 16 July 2009
A wonderful presentation concerning those hazy moments before sleep. A really enjoyable poem, well done. Best wishes, Andrew
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Surya . 12 May 2009
a routine affair has been made made in to an exciting thing.powerfull write.posted 10 for u surya
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Ana Monnar 19 August 2007
Beautiful poem. Very nice indeed.
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Marci Made 08 March 2007
How perfectly you have written of an every day/night occurance....This may be 'Tailor Made' but I will never feel the same when turning off the light after reading this. For me it is brillant........mm. :)
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Sandra Osborne 06 March 2007
Excellent, very nice work. I agree, a work of art,
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Cali Baja 05 January 2007
Tailor - this has such a smooth beautiful transition from waking to sleep. I'm jealous as well. -cali-
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Not a member No 4 27 December 2006
'Full forward hurl' is terrific Tailor - as is the rest of this piece of art. Letting time slip away - forever - is tough. And we let it go by losing control! And yet we have to be 'fixed' each night! Stunning poetry carrying so much in so few words.
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Lauren Lanzel 19 December 2006
your writing is really good. im jealous. : ] -lauren-
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