Idle Poem by D.N. Rebb

Idle

Rating: 5.0


I once wanted it all
But now search no more
As I let inner peace soar
And watch others now crawl

I've learned to humbly idle
In these prosperous years
As simple truth appears
There's little that is so vital

I've had my share of lone tears
Have come to terms with the past
By previous fear, no longer harassed
And have achieved to persevere

I surely don't know every last of it
And frankly, just don't care
Have learned to toss, if in disrepair
And am finally content, I admit

Things are good, don't need to be great
I trust I've made amends with those
Whose judgements I first opposed
As not everything needs to be debated

Resentment only leads to pain
All faith heals, not just the devout ones
Forgiveness should not be left undone
As a little idle, I've righteously obtained

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
life's not all that bad; you make the best of it. It really is too short.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 10 March 2024

Contentment. That should be the primary aim of life. And the prime achievement of life also. Liked this poem

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Rob Lamberton 09 February 2023

Much wisdom contained in this write! Thanks for sharing in your idle time!

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Jim McGill 10 January 2023

Agree. Excellent work

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Richard Wlodarski 19 December 2022

Poet Rebb, you'll be receiving much more *****!

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Richard Wlodarski 23 September 2022

A very insightful poem that's filled with great wisdom. Both the poem and notes reassure the reader that you have indeed found peace of mind. Sincere Congratulations, Poet Rebb!

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D.N. Rebb 25 September 2022

thanks for the kind words. My first 5 star poem! ! It's so exciting

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