If I Were A Bumble Bee Poem by Rini Shibu

If I Were A Bumble Bee

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If I were a bumble bee
I would fly among the flowers
And  get stuck inside a bud
Tightly closed with its sepals
to get the warmth
Where no one could find me
protected by the colorful petals
Provided by honey to quench my thirst
When with  love and fragrance
it suffocates me
And smile  at my last breath
Bloom at once to show the light
But then it will be very late
And my soul will depart happily
forever from this world

Saturday, December 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: flower,life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 December 2017

A very lovely poignant write. Well executed.

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Billie Eilish 23 October 2020

Beautiful, i should use this for a song!

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Kostas Lagos 03 January 2018

This is a magnificent poem! A great painting made of words

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Rini Shibu 03 January 2018

Thanks Kostas for reading and commenting on this poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 December 2017

A great piece of poetry! Fascinating poetic imagination Rini, enjoyed a lot...! ..Happy New Year 2018........!

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Rini Shibu 31 December 2017

Thanks Dillip for your comment and glad that you enjoyed it

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Lamar Cole 31 December 2017

This is a very creative poem about if I were a bumblebee.

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Rini Shibu 31 December 2017

Thanks Lam for your encouraging words

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The Crow 30 December 2017

If we could all just die in a place we love. Good one Rini

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Rini Shibu 31 December 2017

It was good if happens so.. Thanks John

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