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If I Were Tickled By The Rub Of Love

Rating: 3.1
If I were tickled by the rub of love,
A rooking girl who stole me for her side,
Broke through her straws, breaking my bandaged string,
If the red tickle as the cattle calve
Still set to scratch a laughter from my lung,
I would not fear the apple nor the flood
Nor the bad blood of spring.

Shall it be male or female? say the cells,
And drop the plum like fire from the flesh.
If I were tickled by the hatching hair,
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Wes Vogler 28 February 2016
I wonder if he was drunk at the time and never got around to doing a re-write. Probably just my lack of sophistication. anyone?
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Susan Williams 28 February 2016
“If I Were Tickled by the Rub of Love” is about the nature of human sexuality and its impact on Christian values and vice versa. That is a complex issue for the moral man. Makes many of us wish for the long ago innocence of childhood before the onset of passion and desire.
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Edward Kofi Louis 28 February 2016
Life and love! Along the farm land with your adventures. Thanks for sharing.
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Pranab K Chakraborty 28 February 2016
This world is half the devil's and my own, ........................... No more talking needed to appreciate a piece of any creative art. Unique indeed.
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Brian Jani 26 April 2014
Awesome I like this poem, check mine oit
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Kim Barney 28 February 2016
He can't check yours 'oit'; he died in 1953.
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Jon Anderson 29 May 2013
There is a typo in the second line of the third stanza. greet girls should be green girls. Someone please fix this. Take note.
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Andrew Quintana 28 September 2009
Wonderfully odd poem about the complexities of growing as human beings in love and life. I also liked the biblical allusions. Very capturing and odd.
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