If You Don't Like Me Poem by JayJay Maybank

If You Don't Like Me

Rating: 5.0


All my life I have been
On the out looking in
Never had a bright side
Afraid to show my dark side

All the times that I tried
But fitting in just backfired

Sometimes the things that break you

Can be the things that make you
And it's for the best cos of what happens next

So cut me with your words
You won't see me bleeding
Strangle me with rope
You won't stop me from breathing
I'm dancing in the rain
I'm okay
I'm who I want to be

And I'm not sorry if you don't like me
I'll fight the wolves and the hounds
Through the ups and the downs
If no one wants to know me
I'll be my one and only

So you tell me I'm the queen of nothing
So you say I won't amount to anything more
I'll leave those voices at the back door

And it's for the best
Cos of what happens next

So cut me with your words
You won't see me bleeding
Strangle me with rope
You won't stop me from breathing

I'm dancing in the rain
I'm okay
I'm who I want to be

And I'm not sorry if you don't like me

If you don't like me
If you don't like me
If you don't like me

So cut me with your words
You won't see me bleeding
Strangle me with rope
You won't stop me from breathing
I'm dancing in the rain
I'm okay
I'm who I want to be

And I'm not sorry if you don't like me

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cut me with your words You won't see me bleeding. Strangle me with rope. You won't stop me from breathing.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Poignant, melancholic. But the Notes of the poet make me tremble….

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 April 2023

So cut me with your words You won't see me bleeding Strangle t me with rope You won't stop me from breathing....this poignant expression reflects a strong determination of the poet to withstand all odds and adversities!

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Bharati Nayak 08 February 2024

You have definitely found your rhythm.Nice poem that expresses your strength in adversity.

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Rob Lamberton 08 February 2024

Love is inclusive. If it doesn't include you it was never love!

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Edgar Eslit 12 April 2023

This is great! Contrast, Jayjay!

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Pallavi Tripathi 11 April 2023

Excellent write!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 11 April 2023

Powerful words. And a strong resolve. All things good naturally come to and. So what is something bad about?

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JayJay Maybank 12 April 2023

*The pain that you have when you're cheated on.*

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