Khairul Ahsan

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Ignored - Poem by Khairul Ahsan

When my questions fall flat,
I feel ignored.
When those are swept under the carpet,
I feel ignored.
When words disappear even to acknowledge,
I feel ignored.
You know I have so many reasons to feel ignored.
And when I feel ignored, I feel frustratingly forlorn.
And that turns into anger,
And makes me take a resolute vow never to return.


Dhaka
11 April 2014
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Topic(s) of this poem: emotions


Comments about Ignored by Khairul Ahsan

  • (5/25/2014 8:06:00 AM)

    Ah such a nice poem Khairul, yes indeed we all feel the same. (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan (1/16/2019 3:15:00 AM)

    Thank you Mary Forrester, nice to know that you too feel the same way at times.
    Much inspired by your comment.

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  • Kevin Patrick (5/19/2014 5:51:00 PM)

    In many ways I feel EXACLY the same way, it seems there are days, that whatever I do whatever I say, nothing comes out which others here or they just ignore, this leads to constant frustration that just builds and builds and builds until... well the reason I write is because I don't have to deal with Until. All I can say Khairul is that you are not alone, I and others feel exactly the same way. Bang on the subject matter, this poem really touched my heart, thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan (1/16/2019 3:07:00 AM)

    I am so much inspired by your consoling words, dear @Kevin Patrick! Thanks a lot.

  • Cynthia Buhain-baello (5/4/2014 9:43:00 PM)

    Very honest and very human reaction to being ignored. As writers many of us suffer this treatment yet we still write because the art and passion for writing is within us, and that cannot be ignored. A lovely, inspiring write, enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan (1/16/2019 2:33:00 AM)

    'As writers many of us suffer this treatment yet we still write because the art and passion for writing is within us, and that cannot be ignored.' - Thank you so much, dear poetess Cynthia Buhain-baello, for sharing your thoughts here, after reading my poem.
    Much inspired by your thoughtful comment.

  • Ruma Chaudhuri (4/25/2014 1:05:00 PM)

    Excellent poem Khirul ji, Perhaps this is I. You have described my character in this poem. However, its a nice poem and I like it much.Ruma (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan (1/15/2019 7:15:00 AM)

    'Perhaps this is I' - it's a great pleasure for a poet when a reader can relate herself with the theme of the poem. Thanks for reading the poem, Ruma, and sharing your thoughts here.
    Much inspired by your praise and appreciation.

  • (4/24/2014 10:52:00 PM)

    This is so true....the moment i'm being ignored i shut down (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan (1/14/2019 10:56:00 PM)

    Thanks for your comment, dear poet Patricia Christie. I'm glad that my poem caught your attention and brought you here.

  • Hira Ahsan (4/20/2014 1:01:00 PM)

    True depiction of emotions in a simple but attracting manner! Great work! (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan (1/14/2019 10:29:00 PM)

    I am greatly inspired by your thoughtful comment and appreciation of the poem, @Hira Ahsan. Thank you so much!

  • Captain Herbert Poetry (4/20/2014 9:41:00 AM)

    Very Strong poem Great (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan (1/14/2019 4:17:00 AM)

    Thank you, @Captain Herbert Poetry, for your appreciation of the poem.
    At the same time, I am sorry to see that someone has disliked this comment. Negative minds are always on the prowl.

  • Hira Akhtar (4/20/2014 6:48:00 AM)

    true poem!
    It feels very bad when we're being ignored, when this happens to me I cry a lot: p lolz
    Even a little ignorance of our loved ones hurts...
    Regards
    hira
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    Khairul Ahsan (1/5/2019 7:56:00 AM)

    Thanks for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts., @Hira Akhtar.

  • Valsa George (4/15/2014 12:40:00 AM)

    When we feel being ignored, it is pain. This pain leads to resentment and anger... A very natural reaction.... We would like to return only to a place where we are wanted. But make sure if it is just an imagined feeling or if it is real...!

    A great write unravelling basic human nature! In few lines you have managed to convey it effectively!
    (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan (1/5/2019 7:48:00 AM)

    Thank you very much, dear poet Valsa George, for your thoughtful comment and appraisal of the poem. I am much inspired.

  • Anil Kumar Panda (4/13/2014 11:07:00 AM)

    Anyone will have same feeling as you being ignored frequently.Nice write.Loved it. (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan (1/3/2019 10:06:00 PM)

    Thank you, dear poet Anil Kumar Panda, for reading my poem and leaving a kind comment.
    Much inspired.

  • Lyn Paul (4/13/2014 12:17:00 AM)

    Ignorance is so common these days and sadly seems to be accepted. Which is so, so, wrong. Can you imagine how bad it will be in the future. Great write and do not let this stop you from smiling. Many Thanks (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan (1/3/2019 9:14:00 AM)

    'Great write and do not let this stop you from smiling' - thank you, @Lyn Paul, for your kind and inspiring words.
    I've just read your poem 'Positive Thinking' and left a comment there.

  • (4/12/2014 11:20:00 AM)

    If you feel ignored you become mentally strong.A beautiful poem.Thanks for your good wishes.I'm coming round. (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan (1/2/2019 9:14:00 AM)

    @Neela Nath Das, thanks for reading my poem and leaving a kind comment here.

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (4/12/2014 9:40:00 AM)

    Full of feelings and rich in realism. Thanks for sharing my friend! (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan (1/2/2019 7:17:00 AM)

    Thank you, @Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon, for your appreciative comment. I am inspired.
    I've just read your inspirational poem 'An Ant Bit Me' and left a comment there.

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (4/11/2014 12:18:00 PM)

    At times we feel the way you stated in your beautiful poem. When one is ignored that is when one must rise with a resolve. Let no one go into a feeling of frustratingly forlorn. Rise up and make every effort to find answers. Thank you. (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan (1/1/2019 11:27:00 PM)

    Thank you so much, Mr. Tirupathi Chandrupatla, for your kind and inspiring words - 'Let no one go into a feeling of frustratingly forlorn. Rise up and make every effort to find answers'!
    Much inspired by your reading the poem and having your comment on it.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 11, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, April 11, 2014


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