Illusion Ii Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Illusion Ii

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Beauty is what by clarity of vision
more we learn greater we know truth
as we read history as mirrored by facts
yet time seems paradox in hand by realty....
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yet rain is indebted to clouds
mystery dissipates by illusion
reason never defies riffs of truth
i am as i am by commiseration

ocean is beyond reach of moon
horizon befuddles in silhouettes
tide and ebb reason to reason
all earthly riffle by rise and fall

love of Florence ramifies by colors
do we ever judge our own strength?
every bits of raves up redounds
rainbow rills on illusion by extermination

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 30 September 2009

Paradox alias illusion! ? Reality virtually may appear as illusion. In Vedantic concept all are but illusion [delusion] except Bhraman. dr.sakti Cordially invite to read my unread poems and post comment and or criticism

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Sally Plumb Plumb 25 September 2009

loved this... like the reflection of the moon on the sea.

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warner treuter 12 September 2009

Certainly makes one think; but, just as a quick response - though quick is not entirely at all appropriate I know - for me, the crux of the whole poem lies in the sentence Ocean is beyond reach of moon. Yes and no. True and false. In belief we can be conscious of what we believe to be true, and even hold onto this, but only the real truth (perhaps beyond belief) is really there, and will last. I am not clear on this but these certainly are words that predispose to hard thinking,

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Adens Kamwi 12 September 2009

makes me think alot....love it

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Chitra - 12 September 2009

deep! ....mysterious...the title of the poem is not a mere title but a resonating effect in itself.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 April 2010

‘…reason never defies riffs of truth…’ Sound sane reason is equal to Truth ‘…rainbow rills on illusion by extermination’ Here poetic twist where poor rainbow in jeopardy of illusion… Contemplative poem…thanks sharing… 10+++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Rinki Nandy 26 December 2009

your words make it sound more like an illusion... clever usage of words, fulfilling the concept of an illsuion.

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Eyan Desir 05 December 2009

Nice poetic words Well written

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 November 2009

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

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Hanaa Art Nabil Rashed 19 October 2009

life of the Man is the big illusion love also is one i loved rainbow one day i discovered it was also an illusion like all thanks and good piece

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Dr subhendu kar

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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