I'm Intellectual Ghost? Poem by Sando Hussam

I'm Intellectual Ghost?

Rating: 5.0

I float in air, but don't be scared,
my wisdom is beyond compare,
no need for glasses, eyes can't see,
my knowledge fills the void, you'll see,
Oh, I'm the intellect ghost, you see,
no need for books or library,
I don't learn how to scare and fright,
and I take the fear out of your sight,
no need for pens or paper sheets,
my words will stay
and your mind will repeat it,
and though I'm intangible,
my presence will leaves you comprehensible,
I'm the master of wit and quick-scan,
healthy mind will laugh with me, not scream in fear,

Tuesday, June 6, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: intention,satirical,ghostly,humorous,leader,deceit,fear
M. Asim Nehal 07 June 2023

Great satire using self in the poem. I liked the flow and the tone.

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Martinez Salotori 06 June 2023

Subject is very interesting, I like the Ghost's stories. Not seen one but can imagine.

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Enjoyed the humour. Nice

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David Wood 07 June 2023

An intellectual ghost! Excellent poem.

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Poetic Sky 07 June 2023

Self proclaimed? Don't beat your ghost drums of intellect. I am getting scared of you. Thoughtful poems with enough shocks.

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Bri Edwards 09 August 2023

Thanks for the comment on my June showcase of PH poems. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 09 August 2023

'your mind will repeats, ' I suggest 'your mind will repeat' or '...minds will repeat' and...'will leaves you' change to 'will leave you'. Ain't/isn't English FUN! ! ? bri

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Bri Edwards 09 August 2023

'how to scare and fright, ' I don't think 'fright' is ever used as a verb. The verb would be 'frighten'. To keep the fright/sight rhyme, I'd use 'cause fright'. ;)

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Juhaina Tumlu 08 June 2023

Jiddan Jameela. Perfect poem.

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Nabakishore Dash 07 June 2023

Last line is very true dear poet.But I enjoyed this new ghost.

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