Image-Nation: Does One Need A Word? …… [oct. '14 Challenge Poem; Imagination; Medium Short] Poem by Bri Edwards

Image-Nation: Does One Need A Word? …… [oct. '14 Challenge Poem; Imagination; Medium Short]



For an imagination: Does one need a word?
I don't think so. I think that's absurd!
When one dreams, do words abound?
Do words in a sleeper's brain …..go around?
I don't think so.

Of course I'm open to different thoughts on this;
if you disagree, ….your opinion I'll not diss.
I've dreamed in color, and I guess white and black,
but when I dream or imagine, I think "words" I lack.
I think so.

If I imagine scoops of ice cream piled high,
I don't think I need words; I'll tell you why.
I just ‘feel': "Yummy! ", perhaps; I KNOW I drool.
Do I need, for a thought/image, ….a word for a tool?
I don't think so!

Did Eve and Adam, that legendary pair,
use words? I don't know. I wasn't there.
But I'd guess they had an image, post apple-eating,
when God, with thunder bolts on them, started beating.

I (ha ha) believe THAT!

(October 15, 2014)

Saturday, October 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: imagination
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
PH member Brian Johnston has chosen for his October 2014 Challenge poetry contest [held on his PH site] the title and/or topic 'Words-The Heart Of Imagination? '. this is my entry, which i wrote in a county prospective-jurors' waiting room this week in northern california. i had nothing better to do; i wasn't supposed to be paying attention to anything.
at first i wrote 'I just think: 'Yummy! ', ....', BUT tonight i decided to change 'think' to 'feel', because to get a feeling does NOT, in my opinion, require one to actually use a 'word', whether thought, spoken, or written. so there! put that in your pipe and smoke it (but only if you are over 17) .
bri :)
p.s. yes, i know i used 'adam and eve' as characters in a previous Challenge poem, but 'SO WHAT? '!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 11 August 2015

Dreaming in both color and black and white, I would say is a Blessing. I like the saucyness of this poem and not that's not really a word by I like it. The imagery is fabulous as well, simply an excellent poem Bri.....

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Eugene Levich 21 October 2014

Well, I see that- since Bri is now exclusively eating salads- he must in revenge tempt his readers with yummy thoughts about I Scream. You can't read Bri's poems and remain on a a diet! (Actually, I thought he was there with Adam and Eve!)

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