Immortality Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Immortality

Rating: 4.9


A most tender verse, beautifully worded,
if human has survived the mortal rituals

and would possibly go over quietly to infinity,
then a human shall enjoy immortality

and would await that future
with greatest love, patience and nurture.

Then celebrations would be there, my Lord Eminence,
awaiting at Thy divine residence....

Immortality
Saturday, July 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: immortality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem speaks for itself, please read. Thank you so much, best wishes and many thoughtful hours, Sylvia Frances Chan, Poetess, Evangelist and World Traveler
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 02 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Sylvia. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 August 2017

Human soul always enjoys immortality in life. Soul travels to God's immortal residence. Mortal rituals are performed while a soul is inside body. Life's verse is definitely very tender. Beautifully penned poem is shared is very tender to a reader.....10

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Elena Sandu 20 July 2017

Dear Pipi I am so glad to see you are writing again, how true you speak! Indeed, if we could await that future with greatest love, patience and nurture. All we need is not to fear the infinity, not an easy thing for many of us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 August 2017

This is nice to see that you are active again in PH.

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Thank, thank you so much, you have understood this poem, thank you so much, dearest poetess ElenaS! I am sure, YOU won´t fear INFINITY ever, you have done and undergone the heaviest task already in YOUR LIFE, I KNOW that, love you much dear

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