Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,546 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***immortality Of Shadow ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

as rays shattered bespeckle to shadow of dusts
illuminating love in the wings of angel`s heart
lips of maiden touching eyes intone in darkness
i have listened soul whispering autumn`s breeze

desire covers dainty silence enshrining passion
i could behold the sonata rejuvenating by glow
rhythm of seeing resurrects slowly by her pain
holiness entreat upon to emulate the lost song

spumes of whiteness beg upon blue for endearment
grave of heaven ascends to immortality by gleams
waves of ocean seem to surge covertly with hued moon
dream inebriates to drink more cup of gleams eluded

heart longs to float on Elysian bay further deep
lest storm may not trespass into luscious myth
fence when haze less in the sorrow of benevolence
as sparckle of love needs no armament to defend

yet wholeness burns brilliant with no distinction
overpowering time and space accorded upon assent
flame enlightens guileless of soul from sorrow serenaded
as glimpse of unison assails slowly grave of lone voice

Comments about ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***immortality Of Shadow ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! by Dr subhendu kar

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (1/18/2010 6:03:00 AM)

    Really I respect your reading habit which reflects in your writing. Your word-strength, craftsmanship in dribbling with the thoughts and feeling is marvellous.
    thank you poet
    run long.
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  • (12/18/2009 8:16:00 AM)

    heart longs to float on Elysian bay further deep

    wonderful symbolistic poem

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  • (12/13/2009 5:35:00 AM)

    Your depth of thinking is unfathomable.The connotation of every word chosen is
    very appropriate for the situation described.

    I was much fascinated by your nature-basedpoems.Your romantic poems are also fantastic.Whatever seen, in your poems 'love' is not expressed in its obvious form but is attired beautifully in metaphors relating nature only.

    To my understanding, the poem is about the state of mind when love has matured but the heart still longs for achieving further euphoria.Towards end, completeness overpowers time and space constraints.

    One/two days back when first time I read this poem I voted ten before insertion of comments.
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  • (12/12/2009 9:24:00 AM)

    It sounds like when the light departs from the body, the shadow remains. A vivid elegant display of words, beautifully penned. (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (12/12/2009 8:10:00 AM)

    In so many nice poetic words this immortality of shadow poem is well written, (Report) Reply

  • yellowbell alamanda (12/12/2009 4:35:00 AM)

    wow! this is the best!
    but if only the shadow lost its immortality....
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  • (12/11/2009 7:03:00 PM)

    Beautiful poetry. Competent using great metaphors. Whole very well broken down. Very good and beautiful poem. I read with a great pleasure.
    Thank you., for the sharing. Greetings. Take care. :) Maria Barbara Korynt
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  • (12/11/2009 6:44:00 PM)

    Dr. Kar: Very well penned with deep thought. Enjoyed the read and will read more of your poetry as time permits. Please read my poem On the Road To Golgotha. Your friend Lynn (Report) Reply

  • Emma Adamyan (12/11/2009 3:39:00 PM)

    excuse me... r u in love? ? :) only a loveful heart can create sth like this. bravo10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/11/2009 3:17:00 PM)

    Concise, comprehensive, well crafted.10. (Report) Reply

  • (12/11/2009 9:00:00 AM)

    heart longs to float on Elysian bay further deep
    lest storm may not trespass into luscious myth

    hmmm awesome.. fantastic, you have really expressed your innerself, soul in a very dramatic and dreaming way.. storical taste and reality sensitization is found in thsi poem with very professional way.. love the compositions of words and verses and the links betwee. idea is rich, flow is poetic and melodic and the hidden story has disclosed with asweet dramatic style.. love your poetry dear dr. friend..you deserve appreciation..and I say its perfect peom..10/10 +++++++++++++
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  • Maia Padua (12/10/2009 10:06:00 PM)

    wow, Dr. Kar...another excellent write
    soul's whisper, the sonata, grave of heaven, dreams...more wonderful words to make your piece flows with life...
    ..wholesome romantic and passionate..
    everything gives life to your piece....
    gives a canvass a beautiful painting captured in the whole piece.....a painting of immortality....
    you have shared to us your immortal piece...
    really captivating....your vocabulary nourishes our minds too...and your thoughts....
    with substance and with classical touch...with mystery....in your poems where LIFE, in its shadow and light...never fail to inspire us...
    thanks for sharing...for always writing poems like these...never fail to touch our emotions


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  • (12/10/2009 9:08:00 AM)

    Hi Dr. Kar. I'm glad you liked my interperetations. I don't consider myself a critic, only an avid reader who likes giving his interpretations. This one shares many themes with your other shadow poem and I can see you have very enlightened tendencies with the concepts of light and shadow, not to mention a vocabulary that puts many of the other stuff I've read to shame, including mine for that matter. At any rate the last verse in your immortality poem really carries the full weight of your words. wholeness is immortal, for me the shadow is temporary, existing in time and space as a way to hide from the immortal light that burns brilliant with no distinction. if you've experienced this wholeness directly please let me know as it's something I've been praying I'd experience soon as well. Thanks for sharing your wisdom, it's most refreshing to read :) (Report) Reply

  • (12/10/2009 3:51:00 AM)

    such words flow beautiful, intense words excellent write 10 (Report) Reply

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