! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ****maiden Kiss ****! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
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.oh the maiden kiss immemorial
lapping over sweet crystals of dream
yet divine share of nectar pulsating
on furrows of hours be speckling to slipping moments,
yet inflaming entirety triumphs over
warmth causing melting of snow
necessity of red latches deep into glow
tracking by rippling breeze on green
as dappled smile of beauty and fragrance integrating
on lattice of mysticism of geometry
waves of ocean leaps up from stillness
by promise of all white gleams from moon
art portrays gloss of dispensing blue
cascading all through years of limping
onto the last holding of tears farewelling
of course dipping dispassionate
ever and ever after onto last dregs of dropp of red in heart.
‘oh the maiden kiss immemorial lapping over sweet crystals of dream yet divine share of nectar pulsating on furrows of hours be speckling to slipping moments, ‘ A truly …‘virgin-kiss’…’guileless’ … ‘genteeled’…sure to bring ‘pulsating nectar’ Speckling sprinkling motifs mosaics will catch all moments if slips… [to me] lolol Very original poem Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
i agree with lynn. it is indeed a well rounded poem. i like it.
A very torrid write about the maiden kiss, very well-rounded poem. Keep'em coming. Lynn
A breathtaking poem. What imagery and diction! Great subject - reminds me of the purity of my adolescence. Hate ratings, especially with a poem like this. John and take care
.oh the maiden kiss immemorial lapping over sweet crystals of dream yet divine share of nectar pulsating on furrows of hours be speckling to slipping moments, .... Lovely masterpiece well narrated meaningful wordings to express the sweet maiden kiss..10++++
Your ideas and the words you use to convey those masterpieces are greatly appreciated
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 3:20:22 PM # 1.0.0.1119
First is hard to get but the rest comes easily, a sweet kiss!