to have a cool name
might just make one smooth as ice
or as dense as fog
If I understand... the names ice and fog are not cool but these things are. I think there is something serious in the way of humour. nice lines dear.
Thank you, Muhammad. And yes, humour must always be grounded in the serious!
Woah cool super word play with sarcastic tinge. Both aye is possible. Thumbs up. Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too titled, ' smart phones and smart cars...."
nice though but why cool some may mistake you to be COLD
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
or fluid-y like water...surfing through lips hahaha
Tremendous imagery, Soul. Thank you so much for your observations and for reading.