In Coldness Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

In Coldness

Rating: 4.7


Fallen yellow leaves on withered leaves
The winter compresses all oddly
Sunlight comes but with not summer heats
Fallen yellow leaves on withered leaves

Flying snow with wind of coldness gist
Before hearth drinking wine brings warmth glee
Fallen yellow leaves on withered leaves
The winter compresses all oddly


-22.12.2020 Chattogram

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Triolet, (Middle French: 'clover leaf') medieval French verse form that consists of eight short lines rhyming ABaAabAB. The first line is repeated in the fourth and seventh lines and the second line is also the last line (the capital letters indicate repeating lines) . The name TRIOLET is taken from the three repetitions of the first line.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeeb Alfateh 14 February 2021

fantastic the winter coldness in your Triolet~ love to read

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me poet yeps poet 25 December 2020

NICEEEE.... merry xmas to all PH POETS

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Aarzoo Mehek 24 December 2020

Lovely imagination. Spring blooms right from the withered leaves.

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Varsha M 23 December 2020

This is your second triolet. Pretty beautiful. Well woven. Yellow leaves down waiting for sun of spring to shine and bring new green leaves saying buy to snowy white dress they wore for months.

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