Loving Draft Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Loving Draft

Rating: 4.9


There is no snail, no oyster
on your bathing shore;
No swimming fish, no snake charmer
in your diving core

Hither and thither the fountain water
bathes you a crystal rainbow bath;
All over you; your beautification grace
there's a heart waiting for your loving draft


I won't laugh, I won't weep
I'll take birth in your scent;
I won't walk, I won't run
I'll wake in your relation mend

Chattogram © Mahtab Bangalee

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 20 June 2021

This is irresistible. So much loaded with emotions. Especially the last stanza. Everyone will give an ear to your words. Magnificent.

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Varsha M 20 June 2021

This brought a smile on my face 😅😅

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l enjoyed your poem up to the brim

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 June 2021

so beautiful it left sppechless

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Kostas Lagos 20 June 2021

Fantastic piece of poetry! ! !

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M Asim Nehal 22 June 2021

A very romantic poem. Keep it up till u get married - Mahtab.5*******

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 June 2021

A true and honest Loving Draft. Passionately told.Thank you for sharing.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 June 2021

Loveliest composed, beautifully rendered, I have enjoyed very much this entertaining poem about Love. True romantic write.

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'There is a heart waiting for your loving draft'---Super....Top stars

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Dear Mahtab, You are a super romantic poet. So beautifully written

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