Change To Concrete Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Change To Concrete

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Walking; as if I am walking in the scenery of story
Through mountain, hilly forest, bush of greenery
Walking beneath to peak, peak to beneath as spider
Seeing riding horse outside of forest, inside the tiger
Sovereignty of tiger was known to all native over there
No one lived out of the fort in the reign of Nawabi power
Here there everywhere of this mountain was tiger's chivalry
Since that TigerPass was the name of this land as the glory

Now I am running by vehicle through its divided hill
The land is over there with that's name except the tiger
No forest but greenery bush still carries the memento
Cottage, dark meal, vehicle's cacophony now its deal
Concrete tiger stands now to recollect pre animal power
We are all with the gnomon walk since nature to falsetto


-06/02/18 (14 Lines For Tigerpass, Ctg, Bd.)

Change To Concrete
Wednesday, February 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: forest,heritage,life,modern,road,suburbia
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 January 2019

......CONGRATS MBEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE DID U READ MY CEMENTED FORESTS POETRY

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 January 2019

....CONGRATS DID U READ MY CEMENTED FORESTS POEM AS ONLY IN ROMANCE I DANCE

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Iftekhar Ifti 16 February 2019

You’v Placed this place in history book.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 February 2019

Now I am running by vehicle through its divided hill The land is over there with that's name except the tiger/No forest but greenery bush still carries the memento....your personal experience of traveling through lush green area though little modernized is fascinatingly expressed in this poem!

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Sandra Feldman 31 January 2019

Nature and man's, many times destructive, progress don't mix very well. You have made a beautiful presentation of this in your poem that really is a call to attention and equilibrium, which so often is forgotten. Merited poem of the day. Congratulations!

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Sultan Deen 25 February 2021

Concrete tiger stands now to recollect pre animal power We are all with the gnomon walk since nature to falsetto /// nostalgic place sometimes becomes a point of recolleting; beautiful your description

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Moore Noore 28 January 2021

We are living here, leaving the wood of nature now we are living in the forest of bricks, stone, cement and concreate life! - masterly crafted

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Moore Noore 28 January 2021

Natural world now changing into concrete - it's reality, reality none can deny we have live there to welcome every new reality through this concrete life

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Mac Che 21 January 2021

it's your poem where I can smell your city which is now changed completely

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Dr. Antony Theodore 02 January 2021

Thank u dear MAHTAB BANGALEE for your great thoughts. tony

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