MAHTAB BANGALEE


Change To Concrete - Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Walking; as if I am walking in the scenery of story
Through mountain, hilly forest, bush of greenery
Walking beneath to peak, peak to beneath as spider
Seeing riding horse outside of forest, inside the tiger
Sovereignty of tiger was known to all native over there
No one lived out of the fort in the reign of Nawabi power
Here there everywhere of this mountain was tiger's chivalry
Since that TigerPass was the name of this land as the glory

Now I am running by vehicle through its divided hill
The land is over there with that's name except the tiger
No forest but greenery bush still carries the memento
Cottage, dark meal, vehicle's cacophony now its deal
Concrete tiger stands now to recollect pre animal power
We are all with the gnomon walk since nature to falsetto


-06/02/18 (14 Lines For Tigerpass, Ctg, Bd.)

Topic(s) of this poem: forest, heritage, life, modern, road, suburbia


Comments about Change To Concrete by MAHTAB BANGALEE

  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja SinghAkham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (3/14/2020 8:45:00 AM)

    Everything is not permanent which is a realitry.An amazing write! (Report)Reply

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  • Michael WalkerMichael Walker (2/16/2020 6:10:00 PM)

    A very striking photo in light green and a poem which resonates.
    I like poems about walking.
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    DUDE STOPPPPP(2/27/2020 1:07:00 PM)

    dont write that it bad it bad cuz sad and bad bad bad BADDDDDDD! ! ! bad comment bad

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (1/2/2020 7:29:00 AM)

    No forest but greenery bush still carries the memento
    Cottage, dark meal, vehicle's cacophony now its deal
    Concrete tiger stands now to recollect pre animal power
    We are all with the gnomon walk since nature to falsetto. This poem is really very very beautiful. thank u dear poet. Mahtab. tony
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  • Denis MairDenis Mair (5/28/2019 11:21:00 AM)

    We walk on the face of an experimental sundial. We walk with the gnomon's shadow, which is thrown by the light of partial understanding into the future. The tiger's absence is in that shadow. A very thought provoking write.9 (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (2/20/2019 4:17:00 AM)

    Now I am running by vehicle through its divided hill
    The land is over there with that's name except the tiger/No forest but greenery bush still carries the memento....your personal experience of traveling through lush green area though little modernized is fascinatingly expressed in this poem!
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  • Iftekhar IftiIftekhar Ifti (2/16/2019 11:49:00 PM)

    You’v Placed this place in history book. (Report)Reply

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  • Pallab ChaudhuryPallab Chaudhury (2/1/2019 12:06:00 AM)

    concrete truth...
    nicely depicted the recent trend of modern life and its impact on nature and environment.
    congrats for the poem being selected for the POD!
    with best wishes
    pc
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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (1/31/2019 11:09:00 PM)

    Nature and endangered animals must not be sacrificed
    in the name of development.
    Tiger is at the top of the food chain in all ecosystem it
    lives in. As such, it keeps populations of some animals
    in check. TIgers must therefore be protected.
    Thank you for this beautiful offering.
    Brilliantly penned.
    Congratulations !
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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (1/31/2019 11:00:00 PM)

    A powerful, insightful and incisive poem.
    A wonderful write that shows concern for our
    environment and society itself.
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  • Khairul AhsanKhairul Ahsan (1/31/2019 10:58:00 PM)

    'Concrete tiger stands now to recollect pre animal power' - well said! (Report)Reply

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  • Sandra Feldman (1/31/2019 6:58:00 PM)

    Nature and man's, many times destructive, progress don't mix very well.
    You have made a beautiful presentation of this in your poem that really is a call to attention
    and equilibrium, which so often is forgotten. Merited poem of the day. Congratulations!
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  • Douglas Scotney (1/31/2019 6:38:00 PM)

    the bit sticking up from a sundial is a gnomon. So too is an L. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (1/31/2019 6:24:00 PM)

    Walking inside scenery of story motivates mind. An interesting poem is beautifully penned. Congratulations! This is a nice poem of the day...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Jennifer BirchallJennifer Birchall (1/31/2019 2:34:00 PM)

    The concrete jungle. Wonderful poem of the day, congratulations Mahtab. (Report)Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (1/31/2019 2:15:00 PM)

    Truly, as if I am walking in the scenery of the story, the MPOTD most deserved! A 10 and myriad more. (Report)Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (1/31/2019 2:12:00 PM)

    Crystal clear description about this loveliest poem of a greatest change in the forest-history, like in many countries in the world, less green, more concrete is shown. Quo vadis the tigers? Thank you for sharing this occurrence of greatest importance. CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as the member Poem Of The Day, MAHTAB! Hurray! (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (1/31/2019 1:31:00 PM)

    Through its divided hill! ! ! !

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (1/31/2019 1:02:00 PM)

    ....CONGRATS DID U READ MY CEMENTED FORESTS POEM

    AS ONLY IN ROMANCE I DANCE
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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (1/31/2019 1:01:00 PM)

    ......CONGRATS MBEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
    DID U READ MY CEMENTED FORESTS POETRY
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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (1/31/2019 12:58:00 PM)

    CONGRATS MBBBBBEEEE (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 7, 2018

Poem Edited: Monday, January 7, 2019


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