In Haiku/ Senryu - My Complete Story Poem by Poetic Sky
In Haiku/ Senryu - My Complete Story
mountains high and grand,
valleys low and serene stand,
river flows between.
stars twinkle above,
moon shines brightly in the sky,
night spreads its embrace.
pain grips my heart tight,
sorrow clouds my mind each night,
desist from this fight.
love and hate collide,
a rollercoaster inside,
torn apart, no guide.
but in the end, we see,
that love and hate can both be,
realms of complexity.
All the best to your new venture of haiku series of your story. May your pen (or fingers?) be blessed with Godspeed!
love and hate collide, a rollercoaster inside, torn apart, no guide.
Awesome, nice imagery and worth being visited again and again.
love and hate-both are the grease oil of life! - nice to read your as three liners; congrats for being selected this as POD
I LOVE your poem. I like that you did NOT force yourself to rhyme throughout, though I DO appreciate good rhyming, which you had. I LOVE the poem and give it 5 stars. *****
desist: 1 definition: 'To cease to proceed or act; to stop; to forbear; -- often with from.' I won't challenge myself to write such a restricting, technically, poem! ;) Nice job.
Wonderful depiction of the intricacies of life and love adorned with the beauty and wonders of nature. A well crafted and executed haiku. Top Marks!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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2 on nature 2 on self and pain this is what I like about your poems. Good Job Poetic Sky.