In all it's endures, you may encounter
The love, the joy and the care
Then you happens to be blessed guy
No candy, no honey nor trunk full of money
It is that little smile that says all
This life is indeed sweet and cute
Who are blessed with health and sound mind.
A fine and lofty verse written with clarity of thought and mind. An insightful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
This life is indeed sweet and cute Who are blessed with health and sound mind.......beautiful expression about life
If you use more punctuation, it might help me to read as you intend it to be read. ;)
I just read your Haiku-Senryu Story and loved it. But I don't love this one. I say it needs some serious editing, but I shall not take the time now to explain. If you ask me to, I will explain. bri : )
There is nothing like "selfless love". Unless you love yourself, you don't love others.
Lovely poem. Exudes lots of positive energy. All the five stars and onto myfav
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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