In January

Rating: 4.3

In January it's so nice,
While slipping on the sliding ice,
To sip hot chicken soup with rice.
Sipping once, sipping twice,
Sipping chicken soup with rice.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 10 January 2016

A children's poem by a writer of children's books. It does have some nice rhyming and makes me hungry for some chicken soup with rice.

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Photon Roy 10 January 2016

n January it's so nice, While slipping on the sliding ice, To sip hot chicken soup with rice.

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G. Akanji Olaniyi 10 January 2016

ice and rice are very nice with your chicken soup laced with spice! Good job! ! !

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Gajanan Mishra 25 March 2015

soup with rice, I like it, thanks.

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 January 2016

Short and sweet. Loved it.

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Susan Williams 10 January 2016

alliteration suits slipping and sliding on the ice and then warming up the body by sipping hot chicken soup. This little poem is expertly crafted

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Rajnish Manga 10 January 2016

This is really a lovely poem showing how the biting chill could be set off effectively with the help of simple things just as hot chicken soup. Excellent expression with perfect rhyme. Thanks.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 January 2016

A short and sweet poem, can be a darling of children. Thanks for sharing.

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Manonton Dalan 10 January 2016

Maurice you could join my tribe..eating arozcaldo i love that too

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