In Memory - Always! Poem by Deepti Agarwal

In Memory - Always!

Rating: 5.0


Oh she was so beautiful
big black eyes
slim slender fragile body
her moves were so intoxicating
nobody could resist
giving repitative glancing...

how lucky I felt when she
accepted my friendship
since then I had worshiped
day in and day out thinking about her
caring for her...

God! why are you so cruel sometimes
you took her away
leaving me behind in pain and tears
to be friendly again, I fear
the agony and pain... how can I bear?

She was so small and cute
while playing, always I smiled
now she is resting in my backyard
under a flowering tree
Oh my dear Fish..... You Rest in Peace! !

~12/08/08~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richa Dhodi 08 October 2008

That was a lovely slab. i liked it. :) a lot

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Jyoti Saxena 30 August 2008

that was cute----the discribtion so vivid!

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Kesav Easwaran 29 August 2008

a poem for your fish, once beloved and now dead... that is a real poetic mind there...nicely wrtten, deepti 10

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C T Heart 25 August 2008

In the memory of your beloved fish.......lovely written.

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