Deepti Agarwal


Innocence Lost. - Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Innocent girl of seven
always looked at heaven,
hoping to get a glimpse
of her father long gone, since...

No where were colours
which made her pailer.
Living among a big family
found herself lonely.

was afraid of demons
did'nt knew will find one
at the place she called 'home'
could not escape
devil overpowerd her... taking away
her innocence,
making her life colourless.

Demon frightened her so much
she dare not open her mouth.
though her heart, and,
body wanted to shout.

Oh! what a fate she saw -
was forced to tie the sacred thread.
Her heart bled. She recoiled back
in her cocoon
no body saw
the tears,
the fears.

14/02/08


Comments about Innocence Lost. by Deepti Agarwal

  • (11/22/2008 9:38:00 AM)


    That was real nice, Deep. Nice to feel it about with words from your the depths of your heart - strong feeling there! (Report) Reply

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  • (11/5/2008 1:10:00 AM)


    oh devil schemes,
    to crush gurl's dream,
    Innocence forever lost
    At the great cost.
    Good work
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  • Ershad Mazumder (10/16/2008 11:39:00 PM)


    Dear Deepti, devils are all around us.God created them to try his best creation humanbeing. Just think deepti how devils are conquering humanbeing.Let there be a kingdom of pure humanbeing on this planet.Is it possible? (Report) Reply

  • (10/8/2008 11:37:00 AM)


    I like the theme.
    great work deepti.
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  • (9/18/2008 8:49:00 AM)


    a bitter truth of mankind....few lines from my new poem on which i'm still working on, thanks

    my heart shed tears in pain
    why men has become so insane
    for few minutes of pleasure and desire
    it murders every second of humanity
    (Report) Reply

  • (5/20/2008 11:05:00 PM)


    these things happen fr sure..seven year or two year..just pick up the news paper u wil find everyday several cases like these... n the worst part is it happens right inside aur homes.: (.. i hope v cud have some real humans around n not just animals.. (Report) Reply

  • (5/5/2008 6:11:00 AM)


    sexual assault on a seven year child? my God! the word 'sacred thread' is painfully indicative...
    deepti, your poem is nice... but my mood spoilt...
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  • (4/24/2008 7:29:00 AM)


    very nice and powerful...leaves many impression on my head (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2008 9:35:00 AM)


    Very beatiful description of an innocent girl.But how did her innocence get lost in this process, I could not understand.However it is a very pure poem full of innocence.Excellent work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 20, 2009


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