In Oblivion Poem by Savita Tyagi
In Oblivion
Everyday
Life dances
In poetic rhythm
Plain and simple
In front of our eye.
Mind doesn't connect
Frenzied thoughts
Create no cadence!
We wander in our world
Rushed and impetuous-
Oblivious of the moment
So vibrant and alive
Wrapped in fleeting breath of time.
A touching piece of poetry! I quote, “Everyday life dances in poetic rhythm /Plain and simple In front of our eye”. You have beautifully expressed the real song of a poet that goes with the rhythm of the cardiac cycle of a poet! Wish you Happy and Prosperous New Year 2018
Yes! ! ! ! You see this clearly and write it with verve! Frenzied thoughts Create no cadence! - - - - - - - - - - - -] so excellently said Wrapped in fleeting breath of time. - - - - -]outstanding image. This is definitely a 10+++++++++++++ poem! ! ! !
Very rightly said Savita..excellent write on life....Wish you a very Happy New Year
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4/26/2024 12:58:06 PM # 1.0.0.1119
In our mad rush and frenzied thoughts, we fail to see the moments skipping by and fail to enjoy life dancing around in poetic rhythm! So beautifully put, Savita!