In The Best Time Honored Way Poem by Dónall Dempsey

In The Best Time Honored Way

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And so, it got to Sex!
& we both knew

...what was to happen next!

I tremblingly
peeling off a pair of panties

only
to be
met
with yet

...another pair of panties!

Compelling a strange sort of
wierd de-ja vu?

You told me
you were cold
& so...wore 2.

Oh! My poor shivering dear!

I so...pitied you...your plight

that I manfully set about

warming you up
in the best time-honored way!

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This was originally a haiku entitled:

A KNICKERS TOO FAR!

Remove her knickers
only to find...another?
'I was cold! ' she said.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Daffodil 28 October 2007

LOL! ! What? ? Not enough blankets? ? ? LOL! Hugs, Dee

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Dee Dee Wright 28 October 2007

This is so witty and funny and tender all at the same time. I remember a haiku version of this that was utterly charming...will you put that on as well? What a slice of life we got here...the intimacy of the moment that only a couple can share and laugh about it later! I like the sense of humour that resolvies it in that stiff (! ?) upper lip way of not saying exactly what is happening but we know exactly what is happening. How very Victorian of you! I shall now lay back and think not of England but of this poem and have a jolly good laugh...what? love Dee Dee

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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