In The Wind Poem by Smoky Hoss

In The Wind

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a feather goes by
blowing in the wind,
and then back the other way
in a dying tailspin-
it comes
it goes,
wherever
the wild wind blows-
and so, the vain plans of man
like a house built of straw,
it all rises...
only to fall-
as a vapor
riding in the wind,
we're here just a moment
then, gone once again-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noreen Carden 25 September 2013

Hey Smoky great poem with a very definite message well done

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Joseph Anderson 20 September 2013

Sadly, you are so right. i guess the answer is not blowing in the wind. Truly, a great metaphor for life.s condition

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Valerie Dohren 20 September 2013

We certainly are Smoky - beautifully written, and a great metaphor.

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