In Those Few Days Of Quest For You-04 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

In Those Few Days Of Quest For You-04

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While in quest
I stand with you
By the deep dark well
Of my infinite voidness.



Why does the fire of lust
Play hide and seek
On the murky shores of
Our eyes seeking stillness
And quietude of life.


Our dream resonates
with us, the heart craves
to hear the unstrung
sound of coherence
song of our unsung
nuptial music of youth.



To measure the depth of love,
To seek each other's shadow-
Under the unwanted Sunshine
of worlds elsewhere.

Tuesday, December 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,loneliness,longing,love,love and dreams,love and friendship,quest
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An elegy written by a lover for the princess who owes nothing yet owns everything in and around.The quest for depth of love and passion at times plays a hide and seek like the silver lining on the rainy sky of hearts.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sabita Sahoo 05 December 2017

To measure the depth of love, To seek each other's shadow- Under the unwanted Sunshine of worlds elsewhere. Quite enjoyable poem. Nicely penned.+10++++

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D Priyanka Singh 06 December 2017

While in quest I stand with you By the deep dark well Of my infinite voidness. One of the greatest sweet poems I have ever read in this site. I love this poem so so much Sir. Thanks for sharing it.

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D Priyanka Singh 06 December 2017

While in quest I stand with you By the deep dark well Of my infinite voidness. One of the greatest sweet poems I have ever read in this site. I love this poem so so much Sir. Thanks for sharing it. 10+++++++++++++ Thanks DP

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Alina Kaikeyi 06 December 2017

Our dream resonates with us, the heart craves to hear the unstrung sound of coherence song of our unsung nuptial music of youth. Lovely poem shared. 10++++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 26 February 2018

Our dream resonates with us, the heart craves to hear the unstrung sound of coherence song of our unsung nuptial music of youth. A poem so well written. 10+++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 26 February 2018

Our dream resonates with us, the heart craves to hear the unstrung sound of coherence song of our unsung nuptial music of youth. A poem so well written.

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Prativa Rani 26 February 2018

While in quest I stand with you By the deep dark well Of my infinite voidness. One of the greatest sweet poems I have ever read in this site. I love this poem so so much Sir. Thanks for sharing it. 10+++++++

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

To measure the depth of love, To seek each other's shadow- Under the unwanted Sunshine of worlds elsewhere. So beautifully penned. 10+++++

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Alina Kaikeyi 06 December 2017

Our dream resonates with us, the heart craves to hear the unstrung sound of coherence song of our unsung nuptial music of youth. Lovely poem shared. 10++++ Alina

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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