In Thy Melting Memories - 01 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

In Thy Melting Memories - 01

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Again you came
Leaning against my
Intimate desires and passions
Nodded to my urges
Affirmed to my longings within.

A path into the unknown
Lonely, yet crowded with memories
Invisible, still akin to my heart
Nostalgic, but yet to rediscover
ablazewith thy holy presence.

Anticipated earlier although
Love for the untouched would
Indulge my whole essence in, and
Never would my soul, invoke this
Antimatter for the universe I dwell.

All that I had in the lives here
Little did they assume a shape,
Indefinitely surrounding me
Nesting on the void of my soul
And countless moments, that never came! !

In Thy Melting Memories - 01
Wednesday, March 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: abstract,desire,loneliness,love and friendship,mystery,passion,timeless,absence
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A-L-I-N-A, a sweet little teen who was a jewel of girls I came across in one of my poetic voyages through my thosedays when I loved to serve as a teacher of senior Secondary Schools. This happens to be a tribute to her beautiful eyes and loving heart that kept on inspiring me to write 10 pages a day. And it was written on her special request to write a poem in her name Acrostically, to which I had succumbed.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 19 May 2016

A path into the unknown! Nice work.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 10 May 2016

Again you came Leaning against my Intimate desires and passions Nodded to my urges Affirmed to my longings within. A path into the unknown Lonely, yet crowded with memories Invisible, still akin to my heart Nostalgic, but yet to rediscover ablaze with thy holy presence. Anticipated earlier although Love for the untouched would Indulge my whole essence in, and Never would my soul, invoke this Antimatter for the universe I dwell. Beautifully woven, a poem of substance. Thanks for sharing this poem. Full marks for it. Seema

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Prativa Rani 13 November 2017

I feel overwhelmed to read this poem, I agree with you dear poet Seema Devi.

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Savita Tyagi 21 April 2016

Beautiful poem. Going into the depths of inner world where countless happy memories as well as our disappointment and frustration collide..... The poem captures it well. Enjoyed reading.Thank you for sharing.

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Prativa Rani 26 February 2018

Anticipated earlier although Love for the untouched would Indulge my whole essence in, and Never would my soul, invoke this Antimatter for the universe I dwell. Beautifully woven, a poem of substance. Thanks for sharing this poem. 10+++

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Prativa Rani 26 February 2018

Anticipated earlier although Love for the untouched would Indulge my whole essence in, and Never would my soul, invoke this Antimatter for the universe I dwell. Beautifully woven, a poem of substance. Thanks for sharing this poem.

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Rajendra Rout 29 November 2017

Beautifully woven, a poem of substance. Thanks for sharing this poem. Full marks for it. 10

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Prativa Rani 13 November 2017

All that I had in the lives here Little did they assume a shape, Indefinitely surrounding me Nesting on the void of my soul And countless moments, that never came! ! Lovely poem shared, thanks.10.

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Anita Aparajita Das 19 July 2016

All that I had in the lives here Little did they assume a shape, Indefinitely surrounding me Nesting on the void of my soul And countless moments, that never came! ! Thanks poet for sharing this lovely poem. 10 for it.

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Prativa Rani 13 November 2017

I feel overwhelmed to read this poem, I agree with you dear mam

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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