~ Inebriant Universale ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Inebriant Universale ~

Rating: 4.7


Give me to my heart’s content,
Fill to my heart’s fulfillment,
Spill to my heart’s enjoyment,
Deluge to my heart’s contentment.

Give me:
That inebriates
Whole Universe
Give me that.

I’ll sip and lap
Like just hap
To be Unison-One
With Boozed Universe.

Give me
Nectar even scant
That Universal Inebriant.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Boozed and binged by ‘Universal Inebriant ‘ Superbly conceived and expressed. Ten++ consciously not by so called boozedly LOL!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 24 October 2009

Honey, nectar sweet ending.

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Bachha Chakravorty 01 December 2009

Fulfillment is itself that Inebriant… To relish that one has to Sip and Lap and such state is short [LOL]: Ecstasy, rapture, rhapsodic so ‘…Like just hap…’ it is humble explanation to Poet Paul .. Excellent and …well presented...

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 27 April 2010

To be be filled with life is in and of it self fulfilment and provides content. Just a little in unison with the universe is awesome! ...sweet nectar [75 years of it], provided sobriety after, celebrating my birthday [26th] truely a sweet poem. a ten...altho the vote does not register

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Marieta Maglas 30 April 2010

a wonderful piece in itself...a fantastic style...thank you for sharing...

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Rajaram Ramachandran 28 November 2010

A good prayer for nectar that will give eternal life to understand some the universal God's creations.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 November 2010

Wonderful poem having a lot of wisdom and depth. The ideas are interesting and the style is innovative. I liked the poem. Nice write.

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Ken E Hall 24 November 2010

Nectar of life the wonder why we are here I too booze with getting drunk with fresh air.................as I write I view the wonder of life on TV showing the birth of a baby elephant..luvli coincidence Niv...regards...10/10

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Kevin Carney 19 October 2010

I love the way you express you word. To be fulfilled is the high of life. Great way you set it all up and end it.

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Miroslava Odalovic 15 October 2010

I love the way you heal language especially the word 'booze'.

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